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Trash Talk - Wallah

OutlawGene - Fri Feb 29, 2008 11:23 am
Post subject: Wallah

Wallah my first two amatureish poems. DON'T INSULT ME THESE WERE MY FIRST TWO TRIES. They probably aren't that good since I only changed one word on them. ANYWHO HERE THEY ARE!!!!

I see the sunny window

Far from here away

To the greatness and beyond it

It's a holiday

And summer goes by quick

Into the darkness of the muck

Flowing down the river into the sand

I'm here now and I'm not going anywhere soon

Far away from here

I'm over the corner

There's nothing anymore to do

Wash my feet

Listen to the water

Dance then moon in dignity

To wash you away until the moonlight...

Goes away

Poem titled: Sun Wash
Poem by: A.J. Rochlen
Credit: Extra ( PFFT i'm not gonna get it )

The truth reveals itself in the shadows

Darkness covered up with words

The truth reveals itself in these

Though the words cannot be...

They are everywhere to be seen!

Oh should I wonder what one is?

What about me?

And you?

How are you?

Smiles fading in the weakness

My door opens slowly and silently

Forever to be shown to the world of August

I, S give answers to the loneliness

So he and they can be seen in great

Poem titled: Darkness Covers
Poem by: A.J. Rochlen

You probably didn't get this but the first line means that the truth is revealed in people's pasts. Jeez some major forum error with this mac i'm trying to fix. My ...'s at the end are gone and between letters ?'s marks were put somehow. FUCK I HAD TO DO IT AGAIN AND NOW SOMEONE KNOWS MY PW SO MY LOGIN LOGGED OUT JEEZ I'M CHANGING MY PW. THE LOGIN SITE SAYS SOMETHING ABOUT LOGGING IN UNSECURELY. MINEGOBOOM FIX THIS.