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Anonymous - Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:03 pm
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I made my first metal songs so tell me what u think

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/126065

Samapico - Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:03 pm
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Not too bad... play this with real instruments and you've got something. The techno sounds make it very un-metal

It's hard to evaluate as 'metal' with these electronic sounds, but there doesn't seem to be much structure and it's quite repetitive... Can't differenciate the chorus and bridge of the rest, if any.

But the main riff could be cool on a real guitar

hellzlaker - Sat Feb 23, 2008 7:48 pm
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lol your right, i had no chorus in the i just realized... i got used to making trance and techno that i never thought of chorus

tcsoccerman - Mon Feb 25, 2008 8:51 pm
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You should probably consider writing this on sheet music..with real notes. You're going to have to sometime.